All Comments on 'Yui the beautiful Japanese Girl'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Very nice

So sweet almost real the bright side

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
much too brief

Well-written, this is a wonderful and touching little love story, and it should have been much longer. The characters, setting, and plot have marvelous possibilities as a full length story. Perhaps the author will do something about it.

MoMiner64MeteMoMiner64Mete6 months ago

Excellent! My only wish is that he had stayed there wit her or he had taken her with him. Maybe it is worth another chapter showing the two of them reuniting with one another. MM

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