All Comments on 'Zack and Jane - Female Dog Slut'

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secondsamuelsecondsamuelover 4 years ago
It's a good first go

I liked it. A couple things: I would stretch out some of the sex scenes a little bit more, though I liked the build up. There also doesn't seem to be much to the characters, sometimes how someone gets started is the most interesting part of the story. But I'm interested in the next entry and I gave you five stars.

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