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Lobosolo51Lobosolo515 months ago

You really need to edit these stories - so many misspelled words, missing words, etc. Quite often have to reread the sentence to understand what you're trying to say. I do enjoy the story-line, otherwise I would long since have stopped reading them.

ObsidiantheDragonObsidiantheDragon5 months agoAuthor

I'm aware of this, and I try to edit them as much as I can, but it's just me doing this in my spare time, hence why I always ask in the notes that if anyone spots any errors, to please point it out so I can fix them. I would really appreciate if you can point them to me so I can fix them. Thanks!

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Hello everyone! I'm a fantasy erotica writer with a few years of experience and a penchant for stories with fantasy creatures/ monsters, hypnosis/ mind control and substantial size difference between partners. That said, I write what I'm in the mood for, and I try not to pig...

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