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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
really, Zeus?

Zeus is the God of Thunder and one of the most powerful. He runs from his wife??? Hera should be so lucky to have him! And why not turn Io into a bird so she can fly away???

obhilaashobhilaashabout 11 years ago
good enough

Nice enough vocabulary, but less and less description of the coitus. Shoulda devoted more time and sinews between the lines there. Couldnt feel the tension. Too much introduction and a lame ending. Otherwise very nice effort. Hi five.

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