All Comments on 'Zi (and Her Sister)'

Not a bad story, but certainly not anything close to non-con let alone reluctance.

This has potential to be an amazing story. This brief introduction leaves a lot of questions with no answers.

I'm not sure what the other commenters thought they read, but this is clearly a short and sweet non-consent story. I prefer the NC stories where the girls enjoy it best. As for the person who thinks there is more to the story, that could be true, but it stands just fine by itself. Use the author's imagination to spark your own.

My only gripe is the first paragraph, I'm not sure how to interpret the hand appearing in her mind, or whispers muffling a scream. The implication is that he covered her mouth and eyes with his hands, but the imagery is strained.

Made me so wet.. the idea of being told what to do...