All Comments on 'Zoey's Basement Transformation Pt. 02'

Wee doggies! I knew something was going up SOMEBODY'S hole! Haha!

sick

This woman would be arrested if police caught one whiff for beyond abuse.

I could receive the pleasure from someone who would realy push my limits, more and more

nice!!

I like the series you're building here. I appreciate your skill at story-telling. This Chapter is a well-written, detailed description that conveyed the sadistic enjoyment of the Domme and the despair of the not very masochistic sub/victim. This is an excellent story for Non-Consent/Reluctance or maybe BDSM category.

While I appreciate BDSM sometimes and NC/R more rarely, I wasn't looking for those tonight. So I was distracted, and paid more attention to writing details than I usually do. To your credit, there were only 2: you used Mia instead of Zoey "Closing her eyes tightly, Mia wished desperately that she were somewhere else, and that this had all been a terrible nightmare." And that bathroom really has caught my imagination, because you described it as "spacious, though not large" and "compact." Sounds like something out of Harry Potter.