All Comments on 'Zoey's Basement Transformation Pt. 02'

I like the series you're building here. I appreciate your skill at story-telling. This Chapter is a well-written, detailed description that conveyed the sadistic enjoyment of the Domme and the despair of the not very masochistic sub/victim. This is an excellent story for Non-Consent/Reluctance or maybe BDSM category.

While I appreciate BDSM sometimes and NC/R more rarely, I wasn't looking for those tonight. So I was distracted, and paid more attention to writing details than I usually do. To your credit, there were only 2: you used Mia instead of Zoey "Closing her eyes tightly, Mia wished desperately that she were somewhere else, and that this had all been a terrible nightmare." And that bathroom really has caught my imagination, because you described it as "spacious, though not large" and "compact." Sounds like something out of Harry Potter.

nice!!

I could receive the pleasure from someone who would realy push my limits, more and more

This woman would be arrested if police caught one whiff for beyond abuse.

sick

Wee doggies! I knew something was going up SOMEBODY'S hole! Haha!