All Comments on 'Zulu Falls Lodge'

Loved the story. Personally I felt the car Masturbation section was alittle out of place for a couple that hadn't had sex. But either way it was pretty hot.

Did Loose something along the way. You mentioned a lodge several times but it sounds like an outdoor hid away at the finish. Then the whole story is done in a staccato theme. Too much like an outline instead of an experience of two lovers. Is this how you tell someone about seeing or doing something? I only rate this as a three star.