Not Quite the Brady Bunch

This was the first thing I had attempted to write since a creative writing class I took as a freshman in college, many years ago. The results of the first couple chapters bear that out. I learned and I think improved the quality of the both the writing but also the story telling as this series went along. If you start with the first chapters, please don't give up because the of the quality of the writing, I cringe when I re-read them at this point, give it a chance, I think it's a good story starting around the 4th chapter, and the first 3 are pretty short, so you're not investing much in them.