All Comments on 'An Insightful Re-Write'

olal, I enjoyed the stylism of how you wrote this quickie. Sharp and to the point, yet clearly displaying the differing opinions.

On the world wide web. Full of anonymous critics. Get over it.

Thank u for reading this. Wether you're male, female, young or old..u r AWESOME. The last few lines of your "re-write" story were spot on to what i've been thinking about this opportunistic site for years. I've been ready to read a story that just gets to the point of y i'm on this site reading in the 1st place. I actually can't write my own stuff any other way. Now you've inspired me to delve into my mountain of writings and put a few things of my own..here on this half erotic half boring site. By this summer 2O16 I hope to join u in the "skip the bullshit"s highest ranks. Then we can be hated by all these "serious" writers together. Thank u again..u r my inspiration.