All Comments on 'Dark Angel Ch. 01: The Meeting'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
LOVING IT SOO FAR

Hey, loving the story so far especially about hoe he is re-telling the decisions that will put him in a situation we are yet to find out about. Hope it isnt too long before the next chapter :D.

subrob11subrob11almost 8 years ago
Great start

Welcome back. 'Open Wide' is one of my favourite stories on this site, so I'm thrilled to see you active again. I loved this set up. Great sense of teasing and foreboding - can't wait to find out the narrator's fate.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Wow!

A fan of "Open Wide" so very interested in how this story will progress. A great start!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Hot

Why stop here? No second page?

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