by patty_parker60
I'll reserve my comments for later:
This message contains feedback for: lesbian_slutmom
About the submission: Wanda's Sister Joins The Fun
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous
Comments:
Since you don't care enough to keep any consistence in the titles,
there
is no way of knowing what story follows what story. This is a sign of
low intelligence.
Since you don't give a fuck, there is no reason for anyone else to give
a fuck, and all you deserve is a 1.
I think this fuck-up shows the lack of intelligence he/she accuses you of
I think this piece of shit should eat a shit sandwich!
Don't let this type of senseless and inane crap get u down, hon...just another loser who reads your stories, beats-off, gets angry because he/she can't get any pussy/dick of their very own, and then rants like some kind of demented idiot.
Keep up the good work.
lesbian_slutmom is too stupid to be coherent and someone who calls her on it is the asshole? Yeah, right.
Also, lesbian_slutmom is exposed as the crybaby she is. If she can't take honest comments, then she should go away.
I love lesbian_slutmom's devilish stories and hope they keep coming, as will I. With several different series going, it does tend to get a bit confusing, though. When a new chapter comes out, I have to re-read the previous chapters to remind myself what the story-line was. Not the worst thing in the world, of course, just a small complaint.
IS ANYONE FORCING U MOTHER-FUCKERS TO READ THIS WOMAN"S STORIES? UST BECAUSE YOU LACK BALLS AND ARE PISSED BECAUSE SHE WON'T INCLUDE MEN DON'T GET MAD, BITCH!
And I'm STILL not includng men. so get pissed all you want, PEANUT
This message contains feedback for: lesbian_slutmom
About the submission: Wanda's Sister Joins The Fun
This feedback was sent by: Anonymous
Comments:
I'm the one who sent the "What do y'all think of this "feedback"?"
There's a reason I remained anonymous. People of your limited intelligence are often mentally unstable and dangerous, especially when their limitations are exposed.
hmmmmmmmmmmm! Please everyone, don't think I'm paying this pollutant any mind whatsoever. It's comical, is all..
Check THIS LOONY out!
Comments:
It's "What do y'all think of this "feedback"?" again.
I purposely sent the original message directly to you and not as part of the public comments because I didn't see any reason to add others to the "discussion." (I know discussion is an odd word since this is mostly a one-way communication, but I it seemed to fit best.) They were
general comments not related directly to the specific story -- just your general structure -- nor the content, which I have no trouble with. If I had made the comments public, that's one thing, but to make them public
to gain pity is another.
YOU are the one who threw a hissy fit because I hurt your feelings and made the comments public. I seem to have struck a nerve.
Why do you care what I think? So I made a comment you didn't like. Fuck me! But no, you had to show others how badly I wounded you. Grow up. If you're so bothered by comments from someone you don't know, then you should stop.
This is the internet. Getting anonymous flamming is part of the trade off. If you're gonna be hurt and have to show others "Oh look how mean this person is to me" you should reconsider why you're doing what you're
doing.
Dear Fuck-up:
Are you FEMALE? Ya sound like a BITCH! 'ooo, why did you post my comment' 'oh, no,my comments hurt your feeling' 'ooo, slutmom, can you get your daughters to FUCK ME in the ass?' LOOOO-SER!
That's probably EXACTLY what he wants, Patty...a little DICK to calm down his feminine feelings...let 'em OUT, homeboy! ASK for that poke in the ass politely; I'm sure someone will help you out...Also, the GAY MALE genre might be more your cup of tea. Oh, you DO sound a LOT like a BITCH!!
it's ok, boo-boo...we understand...everyone commenting on the story so far gives it a 100; you are the only two ball-deficient, low-life, angry, bitter, wish you could get some of the dick Wanda and company are getting, so you throw mud from the shadows like a true boy-bitch (slang for coward)...whew! I guess that's enough for now, huh!!
Patty, I've told you more than once that the more you ignore these closet gay motherfuckers the better for you. You have hundreds of supporters; concentrate on what THEY think.
While the story does have some merits, the plot could be better and with more intensity rather than the constant shifting between one scene to another.
Dear Lesbian_slutmom,
I love your lovely stories about lesbian fam/fum .
Please keep going with yours Lesbians lovely stories .
There are only a few stories about lesbians fam/love .
If possible please keep it with NO man's on stories !
We have so much to give that we do NOT need a man in stories ...
Wet kisses
Helena
Lisbon - Portugal - Europe
Comments:
Your making my point, asshole. I send message directly to you, but you
are the one who feels the need to make them public to show how badly
I'm treating you.
Why is that what I've written has you in such a bind. I wrote the
follow ups as a lark, but you are becoming unhinged. The only reason to
repost these is that you seem to care what I think or you just want the
attention.
Jesus, get a life. Don't worry, I'll take my own advice and never send
another message. You're not worth it.
Mr. Shitty Pants decided to give up and take his bile somewhere else, hopefully to stew in his own bile nd poison and sparing the rest of us his bullshit...BYE BYE!! BYE BYE, Mr. Lil' Dick! See Ya!
Mr. Shitty Pants is really really MAAAD! Him wanted to be included, and him will have to cruise the gay bars now for relief. Bad, BAD Patty!
INTEL-LIGENCE would have dictated you get to fuckin STEPPIN several messages back. Must be HELL to live in the torment of knowing that you fucked up your chance for one of Wanda's daughter's to make you suck her cock after pumping your bitch butt fulla rubber dick. Please, PLEASE say that you've decided to KILL YOURSELF??!! Can't you see that Patty's supporters HATE YOUR LIVING GUTS!?
a perfect example of the type of CONSTRUCTIVE FEEDBACK that has value (makes a suggestion or point WITHOUT, I say W-I-T-H O-U-T) launching a personal attack is the comment "Could it be better?"
Are U able to use your pea brain to figure out that YOU are the one being attacked as every comment concerning this issue DEFENDS Patty and berates YOU? Clue? Evidence that YOU are the asshole, not her? BYE BYE, Mr. Shitty Pants!!
Nearly as entertaining as all the comments!!
Chapter by Chapter, the story, action, and writing get hotter and nastier. Keeping the stories FEMALE ONLY is the only way to go, in my view.
Comments:
Could you please repost this in English?
INTEL-LIGENCE would have dictated you get to fuckin STEPPIN several messages back. Must be HELL to live in the torment of knowing that you fucked up your chance for one of Wanda's daughter's to make you suck her cock after pumping your bitch butt fulla rubber dick. Please, PLEASE say that you've decided to KILL YOURSELF??!! Can't you see that Patty's supporters HATE YOUR LIVING GUTS!?
Response:
How's this: I HAVE SEVERAL DIFFERENT SIZES OF DILDOS YOU CAN USE TO FUCK YOURSELF WITH...SPELLING OK? GRAMMATICALLY CORRECT? CLEARLY WRITTEN, WITH A SUBJECT, BODY, AND CONCLUSION? LET'S RE-CAP: GO...AND...FUCK...YOURSELF; OK?
this tiny-dicked fucks should either kill themselves or get penile implants! It's no one's fault that you can't get any pussy; invest in a fake rubber one, pay a hooker (or a DRAG QUEEN), something: just atke your low self esteem and insecurity about your tiny little balls somewhere else where they GIVE A FUCK!
By the way: Your MAMA LUVS the story! She told me so while I was taking a DUMP in her mouth!
Blame your mama and daddy and or heredity for your small DICK SIZE; spreading your misery to others isn't the answer-the answer is therapy, sex-change surgery...maybe come out of the closet. Just leave us alone! We LUV Patty and HATE You!
I think I just missed some kind of big fight here. As to this latest chapter, Patty, it's great. I still marvel at your ability to turn a phrase. You have very inventive uses for the English language. Gives new meaning to the term "creative writing."
anyway....looks like Sue is as kinky, or even kinkier, than her younger sister!
Now that the dumb-asses have been vanquished, lez get back to bizness: hot, nasty lesbian incest stories!!
Can't imagine anything that would improve it except removing the part between the first and last words
is the widdle punk bitch jelaous? Envious, feeling less than a man? Get over it or don't; the huge majority of those leaving comments give this tory and Patty's other work 100; where's your fucking writing? Riight...NOWHERE!
Your story was very errotic and I loved it! The only reason I marked it down is that the only people getting fucked are the mothers. I feel that Wanda and Sue should be giving it to their daughters as well.
Keep up the great work
PS I tried to sign this buit it says there was a problem with my password/username, so I am submitting it annonymous.
TacRich
Honestly Patty, I'm an constantly thrilled to read your stories for both the hard, rough sex and that your stories seem to add a touch of class throughout the entire story, which I find very well done. Though during the ending I was left a little disappointed, not by your story but the way everyone had seemed to leave such terrible comments about men. I as a male am a little shocked to find those who strongly despise our very existence. I mean I respect my homosexual community very much and have never had a problem with them. though it leaves me a little curious to why certain people are so discriminatory on males. Though I enjoyed your writing very much and I look forward to your additional pieces.
I'm looking forward to seeing the whole family reunited for an all anal fuckstravaganza!
First, I'm happy to say that the UK is doing quite well
in the London Olympics: WELL DONE, Mates!
I also wanted to let everyone that all future stories
under this id and will be posted under the NEW id
of patty_parker60. New stories featuring your
favorite characters will appear there from now on,
and on my yahoo! group : htttp://groups.yahoo.com/
group/pattyparkerskinkylesbiantalesredoo
See U soon!
'PSYCH!'...This marks her evolution into a truly GREAT writer of this genre...
Would be neat to see - this series is hot!