All Comments on 'Detention'

You have two over-aged high school students---19 and 20 unless you're in a southern state. Also you need to go back and proofread then correct a few errors. Other than that, you have a pretty decent story. Keep the stories coming.

This would never happen. Get an Editor. 2016 "teachers" don't strike students and there are no "disciplinarians" at high schools. By the way detentions are usually held after school as well as football games.

What the hell with the "choking out" a student? Putting him to sleep?

You've crossed so many lines here specially with high school age children.

"An erection like any other" Oh, so it's normal?

"An erection like no other" it's exceptional.

In the same vein, "I could care less" I actually cared enough to post this.

If "I couldn't care less" my lazy ass wouldn't have taken the time to post even this. ^_^