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by fierypixie1987

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

This is good in its sparseness. The reader is able to continue it as they desire. Your use of her pov is effective. We get a good feel for both the D/s aspects and the caring spouse aspects of their relationship.

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