All Comments on 'The Fall Pt. 05'

Looking forward to seeing where this story goes :)

Great story.

I love his power.

And he wonders if he's affecting them somehow? And how boring would that get? No challenge, no mystery, no flirting, just women of all ages prostrating themselves before him.

Men aren't just interested in the having, it's the getting, it's the thrill of the hunt. Only pussies get off on this kind of bullshit. Sure, it's fun in the short term but after awhile, you don't get to have a normal conversation with a girl. It's always leads to one thing and one thing only and like anything...too much of a good thing is still too much.

Can't wait for more! Great story.

A great story. please continue.

Please continue!

Excited about the next chapter.

Except for the hunting.

For me it's the learning, discovering, and making your partner happy.

Romance

The Husbands & Boy Friends of the Females would catch on sooner or Later. He should get a Harem from his Conquests and move out into the Boonies. so he can't make anyone except the Chosen to be Influenced. The women could work from home. He could also add a Rich woman with Property to keep everyone on.

Temporarily insane, that is. Right out of high school after my first Vietnam tour in

‘68 I went home for a weeks time. That first morning I awoke to an empty house. I could not get past the feelings that the past months were a dream. My bedroom was exactly as I remembered it. For the next few hours I could not reconcile what was reality and what was not. My mind actually hurt from that exercise. I could find no clue in the house to help me. After a few hours of this I decided no way were those months a dream. Wasaay to vivid and detailed, and about stuff and places I should not know I’ll never forget that day of having to chose what was reality. That really is something very scary. All of the above to let you know how much I relate to those last few lines. Well written.

Need more. Please hurry.

Great writing, I would love for you to wrap it up and answer the question of what happened to him.

I finally found this story, and have loved it.

Not sure why he loses control like his women do, but I was and still am hoping you will revisit this story. Lots of great potential and so much left hanging.

You have great talent, and thank you for sharing, and please consider going back and adding more chapters.

Be safe!!

Thank you!

Echoing the sentiments of nearly every other comment, I'm hoping to see some additional "chapters". I wonder: can he gain control over it? Will it subside? Why do some others "forget" what happened? Yeah, plenty to explore still and hoping you will.

this incomplete?

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Great story

Please continue, it really deserves a proper ending

A horny guy's dream, what a well written sexy story. 5/5

Dam another story that needs more. Lol just like to keep us wondering is what I think.

OMG! Please finish this series!

Thanks

Love it. Seriously, please come back to this and give us more!