by JCBeleren
Would love to read a sex scene where Juliana and Ariel have incestuous lesbian sex eating Logan's cum out of each other's pussies for Logan's viewing pleasure, while Kristi is fucking Logan.
Thanks for your stories. They are amusing and erotic.! The characters are interesting without being trite. Please keep submitting
Ed
Dude, you write one of the best stroke stories. Please keep up the good work.
You're right... That sounds so hot!!! I will keep that in mind.
I'm so glad you like them, and I'm grateful you took the time to let me know you do.
I try hard not to let my characters and plot be super one dimensional, so it's wonderful to be appreciated for that as well. :)
Cheers!
I'm so glad you think so! I will 100% continue writing as long as you keep reading!
I'm so glad you're enjoying my work! Knowing that my words bring entertainment to others is a great motivator!
Love it! You have great descriptions and I love the dirty talk! Keep it up! Would love more scenarios in school where they both try and get away with lots of slutty acts without being caught.
Great series, excited to see where it goes. As long as that direction is not gatewatch.
One of my favorite series on this site. Your work is amazing!!! Thank you SO MUCH! A complete literary badass!
Well written and imaginative. Great descriptions. Please keep going.
I hope to see more of this series. A classic mind control concept with a conspiracy twist. I love it.
This is a fun romp that just became more interesting.
Enjoy your work and look forward to more.
Soon.
Posted yet?
This was great! ;-)
But seriously, that is really a great series. Stumbled upon it yesterday and read all four parts. Wonder if the author is still around though, he seems to have not posted for some months.
And I also wondered whether his ex-gf "Aaron" was retconned? She is missing since part two. And part 4 now says Kristi was his sisters roommate. (Wouldn't mind the sister either, though ...)
This story is amazing. Great plot, and I'm anxious to find out what happens next.
It'd be incredibly hot if they started to want him to breed them, to truly seed them and knock them up.
Especially the teacher
I've read a number of your series but I think this one is by far the most interesting. I'm glad to see that you've returned to continue at least some of them, and I hope that this one gets many more chapters to come.
The world you've crafted is deeply intriguing, though I personally wouldn't have jumped to the secret organization for a while yet, there is far more you could milk out of the day to day of these lives and the people they interact with.
Also, don't forget to continue the mundane of their lives. A teach who suddenly stops teaching draws a lot of attention, so they should have attempted to keep up their day to day as well.
Looking forward to seeing the next one!
I wondered when some external conflict was going to come into the story, but I wasn't expecting the main character to be such an idiot. I wonder who Ariel's old master was and if he will want her back.
JUST STUMBLED ON TO THIS SERIES...ALL 5'S. I CAN'T WAIT TO READ ALL OF YOUR STORIES! PLEASE ADD MORE TO THIS SERIES!
Is his ex girlfriend still sitting at home masturbating ? I thought he wanted revenge ?
I really love this series a lot. The only thing I would say would make this great chapter even better would be if we were able to see Logan getting Ariel under his control. It would make that whole sequence even more hot than it already is
And so much sexy fun too! I love how he's becoming more powerful without even noticing why. Thank you!
I have been following your story and love the ending . it set you up for an entirely different direction. It's a shame you haven't continued the series.
Is that it??? There is SO much more that could be told in this story realm, aren't you going to tell it? Still waiting...
continue please
I for one would like to find what else happens . does he go after his ex or does he add to his little group ? does he talk to ariel about the phone call or not ?
I would certainly appreciate more of this story. It has a flow that careens from one segment into another and yet manages to bind the interest of the reader into the whole package. There hasn't been a cliffhanger even though the ending of your chapters do leave your readers wanting more. Well played. You have the knack, sir.
Please write more of your story. I'm enjoying your other stories, but would like to read more of this story. Keep up the work.
I enjoyed this series and would love to see more of Logan and his growing Harem. Will be interesting to learn what LIAR has in store for him
Logan found out in that class room he can control everything not just people he should use that power to find out exactly what's going on with that government agency. He should also use that power to make sure anyone who want's to harm him in any way can't find him. there are so many ways he could go in this story and I can't wait to read more.
This story is great! Stop hiding the rest! 🤣
I noticed one little ambiguity... Or dare I say mistake... In the first story, Kristi is his ex-g/f's .. good job communicating the trama of the breakup there btw -- roommate, then becomes his sister's??? We never met his sister, what happened with the ex g/f the agency...
Inquiring minds need to know!
This should have been continued. I’m not usually into stuff like this but d@mn this is good
more chapters, more titfucking, makes me wonder if there will be kinks like piss drinking too after awhile, anyways awesome story
That was great but it would be better if you actually continued and didn’t leave a cliffhanger. A LOT better!
I love this series! Just wish it did it end like your other series’s. On a cliffhanger. It’s getting annoying.
Oh no! What happens next?
This was posted on 05/09/2018, so, unfortunately, I think this series is dead... :(
Hopefully. JCBeleren comes back to finish this series,
Thanks