All Comments on 'A Garden Memory'

Welcome.

Fine writing for a first offering.

Excellent portrayal of the Fine Frisson of Ecstasy - Real Time and in Remembrance,

Fierce Love Shines Through.

Another offering soon, please.

You managed to make a dirty arsehole story charming, evocative and very, very readable! Loved it!

I thoroughly enjoyed this keep writing you are a natural

Please write some more soon

lost my young wife many years ago and have similar precious memories

You were very smitten by your husband and lover

and your writing shows that intensity … Please

keep writing and let your creative juices pour

from your memory and flow to your pen ...

So very well done.

Dear Brenda * * * * *

Great story. Beautifully descriptive with such wonderfully filthy details. I encourage you to write more, more, more of this type.... please.

Jack Auff

A deliciously animal feel to this story - but also great poignancy in the last paragraph. Beautifully done!

love how dirty and intense this is, :) very smelly and nasty, so hot. and the fact that it is an older woman makes it even better

Very evocative - and delightfully dirty. You have a real talent for the written word. I hope you write more. L

So very real !

Very nice.....and from a women’s perspective.....an older woman too.....such a nice reminiscence......thank you for sharing.....

A delightful story, presumably very real reminiscences from your time with your late husband? I thought the dirty references might have put me off - I would prefer something cleaner ;-) - but they didn't and I enjoyed the story very much.

I'm sure you have many other tales to tell and look forward to reading them … maybe it's not too late to have new experiences and write about them too?! If your avatar is anything to go by, I'm sure you would have lots of admirers of both sexes!

Love the intimate detail and the intimacy of the sexually charged spontaneous sex. Well done.

What a lovely erotic and loving story. I would have liked to have watched some of the garden activities.

What a great memory for you hun!! V

ery sexy, very raw...

As a disabled m i can relate, starved for touch. greatful.

And stays that way throughout. A wonderfully erotic story. Hope she'll write more soon.

Sounds like you two really enjoyed each other!

Many older women lovers think like this. I can say “join the club”.

Wow...It is hot. Everything mixed !!! :)

So intimate and sexy!

The set up was amazing. The crisp white wine, panties and stray pubic hairs. Well done.

So hot, intense. you should write more, would live to read more stories from you.

I am an elder Swedish dad and hubby and lover and this story did turn me on. So arousing woship of the woman's cunt. I will read more of your stories. I have a dream: I would like to have some piss sex in your next story. For me piss play is a hot turn on. For you too I suppose?

This is a great story. So sexy. I love her choice of words and how dirty and raunchy she gets. I've never read an anal sex story as hot!!!

Your style of writing makes for easy reading.

was as if I/we were invading your time with your man

well done few stories flow onto the movie screen as well as yours

thanks for sharing

Another good story, Brenda. Well done.

A wonderful, "behind" (LOL) the scene look at a loving couple having sweet and nasty, love making! Nicely written. :)

Hope you write a lot more of these wonderful stories Brenda.

This one was even dirtier than the toilet one :) So horny now after reading it, x.

I think Leo was very lucky!

omg what an erotic story .. the description of how he fucked you were amazing ... i wish i was leo (MRIP). great way of telling your stroy ..

i wish you happiness...

regards

Sam

So many delicious memories, and deliciously written. Lovely Brenda

Personally a little less on the ATM, but for the rest, I wish I had this at home.. for sure...

That is a fantastic story Brenda. Please write more like these.

mmmm Yes Brenda please continue to drive us crazy with these wonderful stories.

Intensely intimate. Sucking your own shit off his knob is true dedication. Are you still around?

I almost widh Id read this one first

Like both stories but this one is my favorite. I hope you write more..

Again a fantastic story. Everything I love in a woman, soemone who knows what she wants. So sexily perverted

Awesome intensity and depravity mixed with mutual caring love and shared interests.

I am a little put off with the anal sex followed by the oral sex. I understand the attraction to anal but that as the final act. I hoped he would lick her from front to back and then insert his phallus for his climax conclusion.

Very erotic. Her language of sex is quite prim and proper in comparison with her husband, but her behavior is definitely not prim and proper, loved her enjoyment of messy anal sex, and taking his cum in her mouth.