All Comments on 'Warming up after the Winter Concert'

this was amazing thanks for the orgasm

Your story really conveys the awesomeness of first love. Thanks, I really enjoyed it

I had hoped Hope wanted Luke to wear her Silkstockings, lover. (!)

Not bad,

You could do a lot worse than taking this couple, and developing the relationship and their sex education with each other...

Great story! Hope there is more to come.

Thanks for all the support! Feel free to send me story ideas or just thoughts/comments

I really hate it when characters' dimensions and details are spat out like they're sport statistics. It's lazy, boring, and, more often than not, those stats have no bearing on the story. Instead of feeding the reader irrelevant information, let the reader use their imagination and fill in the blanks themselves. If a character's physical attributes must be given to the reader, show, don't tell.