All Comments on 'Visiting Gotham Ch. 06'

Intresting twist at end, but also felt more like an open endding then a true endding

Huh?

Kind of a weird, twisted ending. Unexpected, but still, it does make a certain level of sense. I do feel a little bad for the guy, being forcibly turned into Joker 2.0. (even if he DOES get to bang Harley Quinn from now on)

My only real complaints about this one was; A) it was/felt rather short, B) I waited something like 2 years(?) for it, C) it apparently is the FINAL installment! (and I was really enjoying this story & was hoping for more)

Otherwise, great work!

(Apparently even my complaints are mostly complimenting.)

When I started this story I had a bunch of ideas but then got shut down by a lot of rules that the site has about how we can use copyrighted characters and it made me have to go in a different direction. The ending was always going to be like that with him running into her years later after she had been labeled as "sane" and released. Whether or not he becomes the actual new joker is up for interpretation, he was kind to her and the Joker was not so I doubt she would want him to be exactly like he was. Either way I am glad you liked it, wished I could have done more with it but It needed an ending even it was a bit rushed.

I enjoyed the series, but the ending feels wrong. She escaped Joker, breaking his nose, found a relationship with Ivy. I could see her deciding she's in love with Dean after all that happened, but turning him into Joker? Like I said, it feels wrong.

This was really good. I like the ending, Intresting way to end a series.

You should do another DC series, this time starting a member of the Flash family and the fastest girl alive: Jesse Chambers also known as Jesse Quick.

Jessica/Jesse Belle Chambers known superhero as Jesse Quick, has the perfect life. She has two loving parents who once were superheros who love her and treat her like a princess and her father is brillant scientist who owns a company called Quickstart Enterprises which one day Jesse will own. She has a good time at school, has good friends and the other girls and is adore by everyone becuase Jesse is sweet and kind and compassionate to those around her even as Jesse Quick, she is a genius and has a hot and sexy body.