All Comments on 'Lydia'

I really like the voice, for lack of a better word, that this was written in. Fun, playful even. Now that that is out of the way….holy mother of gods that was HOT!!!! Can’t wait for a follow up! Well done

Wow! Very, very hot. Five stars from me.

great story; nice way to drive action and take us on the path you like

only one suggestion: write other chapters; thanks

Very intoxicating! Hope there is more!

I hope you write a second or third chapter see were this leads after the dinner!

I loved it!! Make this a continuing story! I was so horny I had to .....

Outstanding !!! This definitely needs to be part of a series!! New hair style. Tattooed. Pierced. And finally collared before she's sent back to hubby....

Not into the submission/domination stuff but others will like it. Good effort.

Yes, my wife loved it…. More please! Miss Lydia deserves more…

Please more! I just love how bold Lydia is, turns me on so much so that my loins are burning with anticipation…

Hot Hot HOT! Got very horny reading this one. Excellent writing. Please make this a continuing story. Love Miss Lydia.

Excellent story, great writing skills as you defined the sex acts in such a hot and demeaning way as Lydia puts the Professional Women in her place. Do hope you continue with this story as it would be great to read how Lydia humiliates the Professional woman in from of others and even makes her practice on other fine pussies. Keep adding chapters to this story and I gave this story a 5.

Thanks to all for commenting on this story. I have no idea how to use this site or post things. I'm tech challenged, so all tips welcome. I'd like to give followers updates and news on my stories. I'm posting here to see if that works! (Boy, do I need help!) :-)

Author Update: I'm publishing under the pen name Drew Onyx on all the pay sites. I hope you will check me out and support my goal of doing this full/almost full time as I progress. I'm not putting links or mentioning other web sites because I don't want to break any protocols. But I'm published on the biggest one of them all.

Again, if anyone can tell me where to put these updates I'd appreciate the help!

Super Hot story, I loved it!

My legs were shaking.

Liked the story. Especially, liked the way resort worker spoke in short statements. Reminded me that she was an ethnic hottie

phew