All Comments on 'The Flattery of Batteries'

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walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 17 years ago
Excellent! Great job!

I really enjoyed this! It is well written and extremly arousing!

Great work!

ReverendFrishieReverendFrishieover 17 years ago
Um... Exciting to say the least.. -=grins=-

MMMmmm I loved it, Minxie hon. You certainly excited something and I can't wait for the sequel -=wicked grin=-

-Revvy

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I could feel her frustration and her anticipation.

I was so drawn in to her needed this release, I couldn't stop reading it. It was so well done when you kept having her remind herself her promise to her lover. I can't wait until part 2.

-- Coach

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Awesome story.

Great story. Loved how dynamic it was, getting into the children's toys and everything. Oh... did I mention I'm a big fan of denial? - LT

MastersWenchMastersWenchalmost 8 years ago

I love the way you expressed the extreme longing... Well done! xx

KevinTBAWarriorKevinTBAWarrioralmost 8 years ago

It's hot and amazing :D

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