All Comments on 'Bimbo Outbreak Pt. 16'

I greatly enjoy the stories and understand the pitfalls of writing. You are doing and excellent job and I like the interesting new strain and the milking station. I think a prostate stimulator could be added to increase production with the milking station.

Your story is a fun read. I'm loving the new bitch Dom, she seems like she'll be a great antagonist.

loving these stories, but when do the sisters get to join the fun?

In long time i like to read an origin story about the virus. And how it began to spread and how the people found about it.

Thanks for all the kind comments and awesome encouragement, folks. On the subject of Tom's sisters, I am looking for an reasonable, organic moment for them to enter the steamier parts of the story (though Britney's aforementioned age precludes her from anything graphic by Literotica's rules and guidelines). Up until now they have been there as an emotional anchor for Tom and another rare "rational" perspective in a world gone mad. So we'll have to wait and see, no spoilers.

Wow, interesting addition to the virus strain. Nice to see you expanding your story. I was wondering if there were going to be some sort of grouping of various bimbo strains as the male population is bottoming out. I mean like skanks group together to hunt for men, MILFS, amazons, etc. because it seems that there’s some animosity between different bimbo types.

But this Queen Bitch is something else! Can’t wait to see what your plan is for her!

So yeah I do like the world building part of it till now ....

Cum dependency++

Mutations/races ++

King++

necessities for world completed

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Antagonist caracter dev ...lets see

Protagonist/MC character dev ++ (more work required ... sis characters could help with that ..I haven't read after this chapter till now )

As far as the mutations are concerned , its fine ..... if I would have written the story I would put more dynamics into mutations part next ...

But as I said world building is still starting good. I would also try not ruin the story by reducing the suspence when I uncoVer the rest of the rules . And yeah , the normal stuff like writting , editing etc. are great because you are putting lot of effort into it.

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- AY

Ohh, we have some competition for Tom? Interesting.