All Comments on 'Satan's Slaves MC 06'

What have you proven with this story? That you can drug someone and that they'll do whatever you want? A loving wife? No way

Way way too tame. Try to get a lot more perversion into the story. This is just yawn inducing "big black cock, now another big black cock, now still more big black cock." How sexy is that? Answer: it isn't. Go big or don't go at all man.

Gawd, written by an individual with serious mental and emotional issues. Author, get help asap.

Beyond depravity. Completely sick.

So this is written by, and written for the smooth brain people?

This series contains many elements that are beyond the norm for a typical Loving Wives story submitted in the category. The components that might normally have casual references sre presented in this series as the major theme of the plot. Strong use of illegal drugs, those drugs being essentially forced onto an individual, forced coercion, non-consent, psychological mental reconditioning, physical abuse, sado-masochistic treatment, forced bondage, interracial sex, interracial gang bangs, and more. Emily is the main female character who is being systematically reconditioned to be a cash cow for a crime riddled motorcycle club. Emily has been the focus for the criminals because they view her not as a human being, but rather as a profit center for their financial benefit. They use mental coercion and psychological reprofiling to shape Emily into an easy to control sex slave for their use. The methodology outlined by the writer to achieve their goals makes for a story that goes beyond the boundaries of a 'normal' Loving Wives submission. Yes, Emily is technically a 'wife' in this story. But a preponderance of Literotica stories have wives in them, it doesn't make them ALL Loving Wives stories. This series is some of those. Emily's story doesn't suit this category and certainly not the readership of it. Sure some will rave with joy about the heinous treatment of Emily and her husband. But this storyline is really just twisted and sick, not worthy of Loving Wives. Naturalhammer, please get some psychological counseling.

Sad and boring.

What's with this Chris , Why did you make him sich a pussy. I think your boybwants to be bred next cuz he certainly isn't a man

Every single person ripping this story read the whole thing (and the five prequels before it) with a hard-on. In post-nut shame, these incels now attack it anonymously. Great story - keep it going.

seven pages of shit 1*

Fucking awesome story and very written and entertaining. Great story telling about consenting adults making choices THEY WANT TO MAKE. And the BONUS is it seems to upset lots of folks that hate this type of story on an erotic story site. Go figure. Let it rock on. Cheers

Do you think we are finally at an end of all the racist bullshit all the overly large cock, unlimited amounts of cum, always black on white. Enough is enough not only from the writer but Literotica this shit belongs in IR category

no way is Emily a loving wife.

I read it, but wish I hadn't. It is patently racist and offensive. It isn't really sexy, it is rude, crude rape. Frankly, it should be removed by the referees. It is way over the line, and hardly entertaining. If in real life, any country would assign jail time.

Great story - imaginative and new. Anyone complaining about it secretly liked it, or they would have stopped reading it before the end. Don’t let the haters bring you down. Good work.

Where’s the next installment? I was sure both Chris and his wife were going to find out that in the end they were not members of the club, but rather their slaves, marked and pimped out for profit.

Where is the next installment? I though by now they’d both be tattooed “PROPERTY OF SATAN’sS SLAVES”.

Did you enjoy writing that? Its amazing what human imagination can come up with, both good and bad. No banality of evil here, just pure unadulterated cuck fetish nonsense. Silly, silly stuff

OMG that was a long one. I did not expect half of what you did here. You are one dirty dirty person NH. Onto the next one, keep writing I LOVE it.

I love the stroppy comments below, why are you reading it if you don't like this kinda thing?

Having been around biker types most of my life I can relate to a large portion of this story. I was displeased that the writer felt they needed to bring an interracial conclusion to this story. As other have said or implied, stick to good erotic sex stories and get off the racial train wreck. All pussy is pink and delicious inside and all dick is round, firm and drops cum during fucking

part 7 ?

This is probably the best breeding story I have read on Literotica, and having her black bred is even hotter as it is more naughty!!!

I do very much hope you write another chapter or two, including where she tests in front of all the club members.

The MC has definitely created a whore for their use, and Emily seems fully on board with that. Drugs and cocks will keep her spreading her legs and she will make lots of money for the club for a few years to come. I assume that Chris, who is now much diminished as a man and as a human, will continue to support Emily and her whore-bred babies. His perversions seem to have come full circle and all he can do is watch. Any love they had has been consumed and erased by Emily’s lust for very big and strange cock. He has become a tool for her. This is an incredibly erotic story, with a sad end. Unless, of course we are treated to more adventures with Emily and the motorcycle club. Let’s read about how she handles her new sexual freedom.

"Sorry Chris." A pause as it sunk in to both of us. "I now know what I want." she smirked at me "What I need."

Emily wants to become a whore for the motocycle club. More likely, a slave whore to wants to fuck as many men as she can. The babies seem to some kind of manly validation for the men in the club, but an afterthought for her,

Well written, but very twisted. Emily’s search for her real self seemed to require a lot of heroin and bondage. She did make a free decision to become the club’s whore, and will now fuck any man or groups of men that they choose. She believes she is now sexually free to fuck anyone, anywhere, as often as she wants. Yet it appears that in reality she has become a sexual slave to the MC. Chris sees himself as Emily’s cuckold, but it appears that he is less even than that. It appears that Emily will become addicted to heroin and will rapidly sink downhill. STD in her future appear certain. Babies - how long will her cuckold husband accept that? How long can he afford that, as it appears likely that Emily will have to quit her job to whore for the MC? What about Claire? In this story she appeared untainted, but that could change, as it has in another of the author’s stories. Chris’ erotic, and even possibly, perverted desires for his wife has come back to him with a vengeance. Can he handle it? Will his love and lust for Emily give him the strength to hang around so he can pick up the pieces of what was his busty and sexy wife when she is a hopeless heroin addict and riddled with an STD? The author has not taken any of his stories beyond the drugs and sex/whoring but I am very curious as to how they might play out - not necessarily in a realistic way, but in an erotic and satisfying way - and hopefully not in a way that leads only to despair and an unpleasant end. Can there be such a thing as a drug-free whore in these stories? Chris and Emily are way too appealing characters for them to be doomed. Amazing and incredibly erotic tale, even if at the end of Chapter 6 it is totally depressing. Is there more to tell? I hope so.

The author’s title for this chapter hits the nail on the head. Is this a matter of logical consequences or is it a disguised morality tale? Is extreme sexual behavior a one-way street leading to destruction? The author builds up a great deal of empathy for Chris and Emily, and then they seem to face a bleak future at best. I find it difficult to wrap my head around some of the author’s stories. Incredibly erotic, great characters, good plotting, but have difficulty finding out that Chris and Emily are more or less doomed beyond immediate gratification. I want more for them.

Watch the video" and she nodded at the screen as she hit the pause button again.

I turned to watch more of our new lives unfold.”

After all this, I want to read in the next chapter how their “new lives unfold.” We just have strong hints in this chapter.

“That is my unfaithful, slutty cunt, that is full of potent black cum." she chuckled. "Get used to seeing it like this. , . . I need to suck your cock, swallow your cum and get a fat dildo up inside me. I feel empty and need to plug this cum up inside me.".

Emily’s love for Chris as well as his sexual usefulness to her may be over, but Emily believes that they will remain married. Emily considers herself now “sexually free.” Chris will no longer be fucking her; she will use a “fat dildo” to cure the void in her cunt when it is not filled with big black cock. Chris will be lucky to get blowjobs. She seems now to be married to the MC and her body and her cunt will be slaves to the club’s wishes. She wants to be their (heroin-addicted?) whore. Will her babies also be addicted, and who will care for them? Can’t wait for the next chapter to see how Chris and Emily’s increasingly bizarre relationship actually develops and how Claire fits their new life. A fantastical and very erotic story.

Emily seems very happy with her new life and all the big cock she will get. It looks like being a slut and whore for the MC is what she now wants. Unlike her husband, she is not confused.

The author has created a very realistic-seeming story that is at the same time twisted, frightening, depressing, and terribly erotic. It is hard not to foresee how Emily and Chris’ story is likely to play out: Drug addiction, STD, child neglect and/or abandonment, divorce. If this is a morality tale, then Chris and Emily made their choices and will suffer the consequences, It seems a false “sexual freedom” for Emily, as addiction and age more and more diminishes her sexual appeal, and disease takes its toll from unprotected sex from her uninhibited sex and whoring for the MC. If she has more black babies, there is likelihood that they will be taken from her for neglect, especially if Chris sees no future for him and Emily and leaves, even though he seems to worship her. The erotic scenes in this story are amazing, but scary as well. The characters are well-drawn and realistic-seeming, so their choices the author has them make should be realistic-seeming as well, and seem to doom them, even in this “fantasy” story. Is this story just about choices people can make for immediate sexual gratification without regard to consequences? If so, the author has set up the characters for none other than bad consequences, immediate gratification notwithstanding. Compelling, well-written, and erotic as this story was for me, I found it very depressing and it left a bitter taste in my mouth. Is this what the author intended, or will he write more and perhaps change the trajectory Emily and Chris are now on?

I find trying to describe the author's stories quite difficult. They are fascinating, compelling, erotic, and, I think, very disturbing. I am not entirely sure why, perhaps it is because the author has the main characters engaging in behavior that even in a story that that is not true to life, is sufficiently realistic so consequences cannot be entirely ignored. This leads me to conclude that the ending will not be pleasant at all and I find this disturbing, sad, and depressing.

Blimey look at all these recent comments. I have some other stories that I need to share before I come back here, but come back here I will. I have the next 4 chapters of this story largely planned out and I wont say much more about it as it may take me some time to get round to them. Sorry but don't hold your breath peeps.

If anyone really cares, I'm all about deconstructing our current societal norms for what I believe would lead to a more content humanity. Down with money, stuff to fill our caves with and rules.

Choices, choices. Emily has thrown aside societal noms and expectations as well as her marital vows to Chris for “sexual freedom.” That she will have, to a point. She has agreed to the rules and expectations of the MC which among things require the ingestion of hard drugs and sex with anyone the club chooses. She be a slut and whore for the club and will bear the club’s “porn baby.” She has made the choice to become the club’s sex slave and whore. We shall have to see how that “sexual freedom” for her plays out. Can Emily avoid heroin addiction or STDs? She does seem to want another child, but more than one? Chris has apparently chosen to become Emily’s cuckold, but it is unclear if he will get more than blowjobs from Emily, who now lives for frequent fucking from large cocks. I hope the author addresses the logical consequences, within the realism he presents, of the choices that Chris and Emily have made.

NaturalHammer, thanks for the update! Your stories do take apart sexual norms. I just hope that they don’t take apart and destroy your main characters; in this story and especially in your Whore story it seems that they are on the way to destruction. Their “sexual freedom” may have been short-lived. They now appear to be under the control of either a pimp (Casba) who keeps his whores well doped up with heroin or a MC, which may do the same, but in any event keeps its sluts/whores well under control. I am not sure in either case that this is leading to a “more content humanity.” In this story I look forward to more chapters, and hopefully Emily’s “sexual freedom” will prove to be more than just words if society’s sexual norms have not simply been replaced by heroin-fueled sexual slavery and whoring/breeding for the MC. I would like to see Chris break out of his fantasies and confusion, but he may just have be content with being a cuckold. Disturbing as I find your stories, they are fascinating, super erotic, and compelling, and really make me think about this stuff.

The last conversation between Chris and Emily was strange. Emily was very matter-of-fact and self-confident. She seemed to expect that Chris would accept being a cuckold. She told him that she would be frequently coming home with a cum soaked cunt, as she repeatedly called him “cuckold.” Does her new-found “sexual freedom” also free her from any love for Chris? Had they already fallen out of love? They will probably stay together, but with an entirely new relationship. Emily will fuck and whore for the club as part of her lifetime commitment, and may end up with a heroin addiction to boot, along with a new baby. Chris will be on the sidelines. Will he become irrelevant to Emily’s new life where it appears that her first and only commitment is to the club? And Claire? Will she, as in the author’s other story, achieve”sexual freedom” by becoming a slut and whore for the MC? Will the author take Emily beyond her immediate sexual excitement to the longer term consequences of her choices, good and bad? Same for Chris, although there likely will be little sexual excitement for him, just consequences for his and Emily’s choices.

“I had things done to me, to my body that I'd never have dreamt of." she sighed. "I never knew what pleasure really was." that hurt, she picked up on it "Sorry Chris." A pause as it sunk in to both of us. "I now know what I want." she smirked at me "What I need.".

Heroin, multiple large cocks, and a vibrator on her clit seemed to be the cause for her pleasure that morning. It is not entirely clear what she “wants” and “needs,” unless it is more heroin, more cocks, more clitoral stimulation, all combining for unbelievable orgasms. Is there more to “sexual freedom” from society’s conventions than that? Will whoring for the club give her what she says she wants and needs?”

"You will be a great whore, we will expand your body and mind in ways you cannot imagine."

Hard drugs probably heroin, and a lot

of big cocks should prime Emily for whore's duties. Eventually fucking will be all she is good for until the drugs consume her.

Four more chapters, huh? Then there is a possibility that Emily will escape the sex slavery and whoring for the MC. Likely she will be fully addicted to heroin and with STDs from unprotected sex and have at least one, maybe more, children from her whoring. She may have exhausted her usefulness to the MC, even as a cum bucket. Given what the author has already written, these are likely consequences, even in a story with a dose of fantasy. Reality cannot be injected at one point and then ignored later. Internal consistency in the storytelling is important for the reader to suspend disbelief. This has become a very dark and extreme story, but I look forward to the next chapters on what has become Emily’s very twisted journey to “sexual freedom.” For her now sexual excitement and plenty of cocks are on her mind, already bent by heroin, but sex slavery to club members and work as a whore await her with the MC.

Only a short time before Chris and Emily expressed their love for each other. Not now. Emily told Chris what she now wants and needs sexually, and it is not him. She called him a cuckold repeatedly, and he passively accepted that. Emily seems to have transferred her commitment to the MC. Chris is just there. Is this temporary, a reaction to being fucked by ten or more well hung studs, augmented by clitoral stimulation with a vibrator leading to multiple orgasms while bound to a bed? Or has Emily changed fundamentally?

Naturalhammer, please do not give up on Emily. She is too compelling to be simply consumed by drugs and sexual slavery by the motorcycle club.

i have to remind myself that this is fantasy fiction and Claire and Emily are happy, in a state of chemical bliss. This is the end of their story and there is no future, so it is sort of a happy ending.

Emily will no doubt enjoy whoring and all the cocks, especially big ones. She will enjoy the drug highs she gets when taking drugs while having sex. Can she avoid becoming addicted to heroin and probably meth to the point where her mind and body begins to fall apart? That will certainly end her chosen new life. Looking forward to more chapters in her journey.

The last comment was meant for the last chapter in “Becoming a whore.”

This entire chapter consists of Emily and Chris watching the video of her gangbang. Emily is obviously very happy, and she obviously wanted to share this moment with Chris. Calling him a cuckold may be more affectionate that I suggested in an earlier comment. Their love may actually have been expanded to include Emily’s new freedom. Can’t wait for the next chapters in this amazing story to see how things develop as Emily becomes the club’s slut and whore.

I wonder if Claire will see Emily’s gangbang video? Her mother’s activities will soon enough become obvious, and if she is pregnant (with a black child), she will be asking all sorts of questions. She is a wonderful addition to Chris and Emily, as I noted in my comment in Ch. 7 of Becoming a Whore. The author has created some very real and fascinating characters.

"Sexual freedom" as Emily - and Chris seem to see it - is a single- edged sword that only cuts Emily loose from the sexual conventions she grew up with. It does not protect her from the sexual conventions and rules that the MC will now impose on her. If being able to fuck whomever she wants turns out to be being fucked by club members whenever THEY want and being ordered to whore herself out to strangers to make the club money, will she continue to see herself as "sexually free?" Will Emily see her sexual slavery to the MC as "freedom?"

It looks like Emily is ready to become a “drug dependent” and pregnant slut and whore for the club. Hose wants to keep her sufficiently drugged up to fo whatever the club wants and whore her out to fuck for money for the club. It is not clear how they will keep her on heroin without affecting her “club porn baby.” Do they care? It has not yet sunk in, if it ever will, that Emily has agreed to sexual slavery in exchange for her “sexual freedom.” Right now, she looks forward to a lot of big cocks in her cunt and is being trained to associate heroin highs with orgasms. Will she still enjoy unwashed biker cocks and the random cocks that she will experience whoring for the club? Will it just become a job to get the drugs? Will Chris tire of Emily when she comes home drugged up and overflowing with other men’s semen? This is a terrific fantasy story containing a very dark reality.

Choices, choices. The author’s stories are about taking sex into extreme environments, and the choices that Emily and Chris make on that journey. The settings are very realistic, or seemingly realistic. The choices that Chris, and particularly Emily make, have of course, consequences. All choices do. But this is where the fantasy seems to come in. Emily chooses to take hard drugs, meth and heroin, in very questionably high amounts. The consequence for her is a drug high. In the stories, addiction or HIV from dirty needles doesn’t come up. This is the fantasy. She chooses to engage in unprotected sex with random men as a whore. She apparently loves the sex and gets great orgasms. STD and the risk of pregnancy is blown off by Emily, and is not otherwise addressed. Anther fantasy. She is bred by multiple black men with large and very large cocks in one story, and what is the consequence? Unbelievable sexual pleasure. Pregnancy is apparently desired, but the consequences of that go completely unexamined. She is told she will be a great whore for the first three months. And after? In this story she is excited about her sexual freedom, but ignores the fact that she signed up to be a sexual slave and whore for the club. Go figure? In all the stories Emily ultimately sees no downside to any of the new sexual experiences into which she is exposed or coerced. Obviously she had not had enough time to experience anything that might impair her drug or sexual highs. If the author’s stories did not venture into the dark side of sex and drugs the fantasy could easily be maintained, which is the case with most of the stories on this site. I applaud the author’s daring and creativity in writing stories that do get down and dirty, and into dark places. But once there, for the story to be plausible, that context must be consistently handled. Drug and sexual highs are not the only consequences of the choices his characters make, even if they are the most immediate, given the realities in the stories that the author has established, An alternate universe also has rules, even as the author has created that universe, and they should be followed or the reader cannot suspend disbelief. Still, the stories are incredible, very erotic, and really grabbed this reader. They certainly have gotten my attention.

In the real world, whores insist on condoms, uses birth control, get checked regularly for STD, and try to protect themselves from unwanted pregnancy and disease. In the fantasy world of these stories those risks are far in the future, so no sense worrying about it. So Emily fucks bareback, uses no birth control, and seems to have no concerns about pregnancy or disease, not to mention drug addiction. I don’t think even in a fantasy world without restrictive sexual conventions, a woman, a whore, a junkie, would not try to protect herself from the otherwise inevitable consequences of sex with strange men. Even so disease, abortion, and wasting away from drug addiction must be pretty common with real world prostitutes.

“I said kiss my cum filled thong. Come on now cuckold." I am not sure where Emily and Chris’ relationship is now. Emily is clearly excited from all her recent fucking, but since both are aware that Chris has been cuckolded, why apparently taunt him by calling him a cuckold? There seems to be no respect in her tone and in the word she used. As in the other stories, Emily seems to have moved into another extreme world of drugs and sex, leaving Chris as a helpless voyeur and of no real use or help to her. A fantasy yes, but a very brutal fantasy that would seem to doom the author’s characters.

“I had things done to me, to my body that I'd never have dreamt of." she sighed. "I never knew what pleasure really was." that hurt, she picked up on it "Sorry Chris." A pause as it sunk in to both of us. "I now know what I want." she smirked at me "What I need.".

What does Emily mean by this? “Sexual Freedom?’ Heroin and cock after cock plowing her pussy for a few hours and impregnating her seem to have stripped Emily of everything she was except for her pussy and clit, and now she believes that she will be sexually free, even it means sexual slavery to the motorcycle club. If the author’s other stories are any guide, Emily doesn’t seem to care that she has been reduced to a one-dimensional cumdump and whore whose only thoughts and desires are for the next big drug hit, next big cock. and the next orgasm. Will the author surprise the reader?

After the drugs and non-stop fucking, and now as a club whore, Emily may feel the need for a big cook in her on a daily basis, if not more often. She appears to be eager to be “sexually free,” as a motorcycle club whore, whose desire for cock seems to be insatiable. The club will no doubt take advantage of her sexual appetite until drugs, disease, or pregnancy end her usefulness. Until that time, she will make the club a lot of money.

This story, like the author’s other stories, is about sex, drugs, and giving up of control to a dystopian world where Emily, Claire, and Chris spiral down and from which there appears to be no escape. The stories are wonderfully written with well-defined characters. It is fascinating, and chilling, to read how they, and especially Emily, but at Chris’ urging, make choices that result in her trading more and more control over herself for sex and drugs to the point where she becomes a shadow of who she once was, and is now completely absorbed by heroin and sex. For Emily, at that point, that is all that matters. In “Becoming a Whore,” the author ended his story just as Emily and Claire were consumed by heroin highs. The world they entered was a dark, dark place but so reduced were their senses that only drug highs and orgasms made them happy. It remains to be seen what the trajectory of this story will be, but it appears to be on the same track as “Becoming” and “The Seed,” where there appears to be no going back from their transformations in these dystopian worlds they have entered.

Correction to my last comment: The first sentence should read “. . . Spiral down and from which they appeared to have no desire to escape.”

The author has suggested that his stories depict, in fantasy fiction fashion, how Western people might behave if there were no sexual conventions to constrain them at all. It turns out that in his incredibly imaginative version, Chris and Emily, and particularly Emily (with Chris’ support and encouragement) pursue ultimate pleasure in sex and drugs without any regard at all for the consequences of their choices. In Emily’s case, even internal reservations are wholeheartedly dispensed with in the pursuit of the highest of drug highs and the most intense orgasms imaginable. In “The Seed” and “Becoming a Whore” the author has Chris worry a little bit about the consequences of meth or heroin addiction, or of sexually transmitted diseases, or pregnancy, unwanted or not. But his role as narrator places him outside the main action, and he quickly admits that Emily is now what he wanted:slut, whore, sex slave, drug addict, pregnant, without any reservations at all. Emily, and in “Becoming,” Claire, are not troubled in the slightest; it is all about the pleasure. So the author has shown that people, or at least his fictional people can make choices that place immediate drug and sexual gratification above all else - indeed - to the exclusion of all else. And he has created a fantasy world where this is normal, and expected. I think he leaves it to the reader to decide what the consequences will be for his characters, so his stories, exemplified by “Becoming,” and “The Seed,” stop, as if their fantasy world is one with no consequences. The author has crafted amazing stories that can be interpreted in many ways and make the reader consider whether sexual and social conventions are good, bad, or just inevitable in one form or another. As another commented noted, pleasure cannot be imagined in the absence of pain, but the author has attempted anyway. Amazing!

The author has corrected tagged this series under “Mind Control,” but it goes beyond depravity to a point where the main character, Emily, loses all sense of herself except as a heroin dependent receptacle for cock and semen, to be bred to cement her sole function as whore. Her transformed mind and body tell her that this is what she was made for, nothing more.

The black woman told Emily that they had transformed her "mind and body." Nonstop fucking and orgasm after orgasm helped, but I think it was mostly the large doses of heroin that turned her into a creature that now lives only for drugs and cock. She is "free" of everything else.

Hoping for more, dealing with law enforcement, cyber, firearms etc to complete her transformation. Does Chris lose her completely to the MC? Five stars…

She agreed to anything more, So how aBOUT IT?

expecting the next story to go even further!

I just reread this story. It is a dark, dark fantasy but brilliantly written. The fantasy worlds the author has created in his Emily stories are inhabited by beings for whom complete drug and sexual depravity is the norm. The author has increased the shock and the horror by showing how quickly Emily embraced these worlds of mind numbing drug highs and completely untethered sexual pleasure.

needs a final chapter, off the deep end! no holds barred

I agree...It needs a final chapter...it's just hanging!!

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