All Comments on 'Sunshine and Darkness Ch. 02'

very sexy- sounds like a personal fantasy to me!

well done wifey. your writing is very smooth. enjoyed it alot

very good wify. looks really good, your writing is really smooth

Great writing, wifey.

Butterfly - that was incredible you took me with them on their intense erotic journey!! well done!!

well written, and the build up makes it sooo erotic. Well done.

Paul

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =^_^=

Sweet story -but her panties change colour :P

You've seduced me into the story, I hope I'm not left hanging. The possibilities are endless...

i would realy hope that you plan to write more to this story. it is rather a very good tale so far...trs

This is just getting good! Do you plan to finish it? I hope so. I would love the chance to co-author the rest of the story! If you're interested,contact me at kerrynesbitt@live.com. I hope to hear from you!

Great read...you need to post more!

this was a very good and erotic read.

Great description, I could picture is so vividly in my head, Thank you. I loved it!!

Good description and clever switching of point of view,

Better than Mills and Boon but only just.