All Comments on 'Enchanted Twelve: Merry Ch. 01'

I like the mix of magical, fantasy, and old Royalty, an interesting blend that has been good since King Arthur and Merlin. Well done and an enjoyable read with plenty of heat.

You warned me it would be highly sexual. ;) It was and very enjoyable. Thanks for joining the chain. I look forward to the rest of the story... ~ Red

Loved the extra magical element. The intrigue begins - will Merry stay with Karl or will she choose a magical partner? Or, perhaps, both?

nymphs are one of my favorites. Anything that deals with water is fun as well. Wonderful work, I hope to read more soon.

if we'd ever get to the magical part of this kingdom. Well done, Tom!

What fun! A provocative twist to the tale.

Beautiful! But I only have one critique. Between the lovemaking and going through the portal, the prince and princess are never said to hav put their clothes on. Do they just show up naked, or what?