All Comments on 'Irritating Bf Exposes me in Public'

Get an editor

Pretty hot, is this as far as it went?

Great story! Don't worry too much about the grammatical errors. However, Word does a great job with correcting those. Very simple to use.

Yes went further I'll add more.

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Very erotic!

Strange... You say the protagonist's height and general sporty style, but nothing else. No mention fo her hair, body type or figure, breast size. Considering this is about exposure, it's very bizarre that you go out of your weigh to specify her height but don't tell us anything else about what she looks like.