All Comments on 'An Unforgettable Kiss (Revised)'

Yeah I still can't get behind the foam it's fine otherwise

This was fun to read. Good work!

Well that was fun. Are there chapters or sequels to this story?

Lesbians. Hot.

I don't understand. Is this from a tv show? Who are these people?

-Terry

I don't like the form but I like the story. Thanks for making it.

Great read! So fun!

I ship these two. Love them!

Hello? You haven't answered my questions in the X-Men story and this story. Will there be more parts to this story or is this it?

Anyway will we see more stories from you soon?

-Terry