by nickisilvers
Simply fabulous, and how imaginative. Unsurprisingly, the story was well plotted and very well written. I would love to see more follow-up chapters to see
how far Cassie can take this. This is just the beginning!
This is similar to how many paypigs get started. Finding an imaginative Lady to make you submit and to continue to keep you paying. Please write another chapter.
Not at all sure why I like this story. I've always been the Dom and can't quite get into the head of Edward. I'll keep reading to see if this appeals to me further.
Oh I know there’s more —- a lot more to this saga. I’m sure Cassie’s control will extend this first part. If you liked this first part you’ll love the subsequent chapters.
Why don't you finish your other stories before starting new ones? I swear, it's like you're a dog with a bone who sees a squirrel.
Pretty tasteless ending, not because of the noncon blackmail per se but because it ditches a lot of your previous character development