All Comments on 'Catch and Release Ch. 02'

Intensely erotic on the beach and at the club; you have a compelling way the words while crafting erotic scenes. And character development excellent.

Well done. Can't wait for chapt 3. However I can't see how this can end on a happy note. It seems that Jo always kicks her subs to the curb whether they want to go or not. Still, I rate this

5/5

J

OMG this is going to be SO good. I love it. The Vicki and Karen backstory dynamic was really interesting.

Oh boy what a ride this is! I know you’re doing something right when you preface a 10k word chapter saying “this chapter co twins little sex” and I stay with it and enjoy it enormously 😋

I’m looking forward to ch3 when Jo has both sisters collared and submitting to her every wish and desire

I am loving the build up to this. I have no idea how this is going to end but as you mention at the beginning of Chapter one that it will be a four part story I am assuming that this will extend beyond the berthing in Miami. You tell a good story but for realism I would appreciate if you allowed the girls to shower once in a while.

It is well written but if I have to confess I am terrified for Karen and Vickey. The only good thing I can see is that they get some real good orgasms, or maybe Jo teaches Vickey how to control her submissive sister so that they both will be happy ever after. great job here.

This is amazing. Scary, erotic. Well written. I love stories where I can feel the emotions of the characters and you have presented this as real