All Comments on 'Catch and Release Ch. 04'

Superb, simply superb and with the ending I was hoping for. This is erotic fiction of the highest order and my admiration for the storyteller knows no bounds. I have no idea how many hours were spent proofreading this story but I can tell you that it was time well spent as I cannot recall one single typo or error across all four chapters. I am limited to awarding five stars but this story deserves more. I sincerely hope to read more of your work in the future. Very well done.

Unbelievably hot and arousing. A perfect ending to this episode, but maybe Genzsub could back at a later date with a new story but based on Vicki and Karen and their subsequent sexploits. We could learn how Mistress V took to being a domme and what nasty tasks she made her slave undertake - I think it would be a winner!

I’ve given it the max of five stars but here another couple just for you 🌟 🌟 xx

Love the build and the emotion, very hot and well done

Wow -- sure made me wet, and then some! When the men were there I was afraid of what was going to happen but this was wonderful. And the title for the series was perfect. Well done.

WOW WOW WOW was this one of the HOTTEST stories I have read in a long time. each scene through was very vivid in my mind. I love where and how you left it, "a cliffhanger" another series potential. what happens at home do they do their own cruise trip? lots of possibilities. Great Job! 5 stars

5 stars and a comment, absolutely waiting with bated breath for what genZsub writes next, I've yet to be disappointed with one of their stories.

Like very much the outcome however you “label” their relationship. Suspected outcome which in a way is personally very satisfying. How you bring us/them there — so well crafted/creative. All characters uniquely interesting/3-dimensional, but Jo — wow, you nailed her.

Delicious and fun. You are a gifted writer. Looking forward to reading more.

Great plot and characterization. I could imagine an anniversary cruise where Toni and Cindy get more involved? Or a follow up where VIcki gives herself to fulfilling her sister's needs for darker, deeper domination.