by lilredfox74
Like how you are playing/developing this not uncommon storyline — simmering with anticipation. Nice character development though Emma fainting a bit over the top/melodramatic. Curious: How does dark fantasy romance differ from fun erotic writing? This “Professor” piece could easily go dark. By way, liked very much your “flesh” poem — thought provoking and erotic.
Writing style is good but I'm struggling to feel the character's emotions. 3.4*