by LillyTerry82
Okay you need to keep writing stories.
The very first chapter of this series was fucking AMAZING!
I like that you didn't rush the first one.
You built the fucked up mental space amazingly.
Please keep writing!
Also do you have any other profiles that we can read more of your stuff?
I'm sorry, unless her husband is deaf, blind or brain damaged, there's no way he could avoid the signs. Cheating sluts always give off signs and smells that doom them.
I’ve been reading stories here for years but never joined. I joined today to say how much I’ve enjoyed this one, and hope it continues
You’re soon going to ruin the story by adding all the guys and the lesbian girl.. should just leave it as these 2 and no more. Good stories are ALWAYS ruined by the blackmailer getting. What he wants, then sharing her with everyone else. Why? You wanted her, keep her to yourself? I never had to blackmail my sister, she just gave me sex. But even if I did blackmail her, I’d never ever want another dude inside her, just me. I wouldn’t share, risk disease from another dude. You’re going to ruin the story. Yes I know, YOURE writing it, but still
To anonymous, she’s not married, her hubby and her divorced 11 years earlier it said
I think the change is not for the good I still gave it 5 stars I think the story would better if you stuck with just Ben
Possibly one of the best stories I've ever read on here congrats. I hope you're going to continue writing.