All Comments on 'Making Mum Tingle Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymous15 days ago

Great read. 5 Stars

AnonymousAnonymous15 days ago

First class looking forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymous15 days ago

Great start looking forwards to the next chapter 5/5

AnonymousAnonymous15 days ago

Enjoyable read.

AnonymousAnonymous15 days ago

Babs needs a solid ass fucking, the kind that changes her life she needs to scream with pain and pleasure as her ass gets destroyed, turning her into her son sexual servant only then will she accept her son fucking all the sluts in the building, she will beg him to join in will all his other women he ducks in the building

dirtysondirtyson15 days ago

Let's hope for some pregnancy in this story arc!

newporter56newporter5615 days ago

Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymous14 days ago

5 stars on merit. I’m loving the story and great writing. I look forward to future chapters when you turn up the heat.

AnonymousAnonymous14 days ago

Loved the story 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymous14 days ago

Please don't change topics in the middle of a sentence or a paragraph, please. Could have been a good story

yangus99yangus993 days ago

The dialogue was absurd. Plot and story was hot until they spoke. Who talks like this?

AnonymousAnonymous2 days ago

Dialogue was akin to something written by a junior high boy who has never dated.

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