All Comments on 'Desires of the Apprentice Ch. 03'

I'm not sure that this tale is meant as satire but that is how I'm reading it. I'm don't know what this tells me about my tastes but I'm finding the story highly entertaining and amusing. I'm loving your descriptive skills and your ability to bring a smile to my face on almost every line. I'm looking forward to further installments of Roisin's training and I'm wondering who will eventually win out in the battle of wits and desires between her and Carmen.

Thank you for so much for your comments and I am pleased you’re enjoying the story. I wouldn’t necessarily describe it as satire but it’s definitely meant to be a fun and whimsical exploration of sapphic d/s. I have quite a bit more planned out for these characters, and I hope you will continue reading to the end.

Each chapter gets better. 5/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham