All Comments on 'After the Hen Do'

What a fantastic tale! A lady's repressed feelings bursting free, a dam broken by a stranger talking to her on the phone. A great premise for a well written tale!

Excellent! Loved the double penetration imagery making her cum along with the coke, booze and Lee's voice. RT

Great story - so hot and erotic, 5 stars for that! Thank you for sharing! Many hot elements and both the prose and dialogue flow well. You’ve maintained great balance between plot and eroticism.

The only turn off for me is the cocaine use, but that’s a personal thing, and I guess you were going for realistic grit, describing habits more likely in certain demographics.