All Comments on 'Bad Luck at Work Ch. 01'

Total garbage, with little redemption.

like it, keep it up, :)

A great story with one little weakness: I could not imagine how normal jeans could fall right off over her hips and ass even without a belt. Unless... Add these two sentences and it works. "In her haste, Suzie grabbed the first pair of jeans she saw. As her luck would have it, they were plus size jeans she had kept as a memento of before her big diet when she dropped three dress sizes. Now only a belt would keep them up but she couldn't see one and would have to just hold them up and run."

This is so good, I actually laughed at the beautiful impossibility of it. So good