All Comments on 'My Big Sister Ch. 04'

Holy shit i totally love this world you're creating, keep it up and don't keep us

waiting too long please!!

I really like it, but I hope next chapter will have more action with his sister and mom, preferably together, maybe even together with some or all of the other three characters.

Please don't have his mom fuck Mini's dad though. IMHO Peter should be the only guy (only guy having sex with these 5 at least) in this series, with a bunch of dickgirls fighting over/sharing him - which is something I hope we'll see next chapter :)

That was a really good cliff hanger and I can't wait for the next episode to come put this is a really good series so far.

Why do you always have to make him such a fucking pussy ass little sissy bitch? All you ever do is have him get fucked by these hot chicks with dicks, like I don't understand what your draw is to that. That's fucking weird. Why don't you make him be a man and fuck them in their pussies and in their asses? Grind dicks with them and titty fuck. You write hot stories but the sissy shit needs to go. Make him be a man and be dominant and stand up for himself for the sake of all men.

Would love a gangbang with all the girls ;)

I definitely want to see a gangbang, but more than that, I want to see a scene where Peter comes home feeling frustrated and his Mommy gives him a little TLC. Something nice and tender, which bewilders him since she's normally so mischievious and self-centered. I'd love it if she would sneak into his bedroom at night and snuggle up to him while rubbing his ass, and then start making out with him before fucking him nice and slow like a good Mommy.

Please don't listen nor even consider a thing that the anon is saying down there. Obviously his simpleton mind can't comprehend the joys of submission

Dude needs to grow a bit of a spine... While I like the story, him being a bitch ALL the time get's annoying. In the end, no pun intended, this is your story do as you will.

I know that a few people have both sexes but to meet five is unreal..

your claim they all had big dicks is not true. you may wish for a person like

that to fill your butt. your wish will not come true. unreal tale

plz post another story...... more detailed account

Hope to hear from you soon

how and when he will fuck them all and to catch Kimberly and May or Kimberly and Mom fucking together

it has a great back story and has tons of fucking

Hurry up with ch 5!!

yea hurry up with ch 5

Can't wait for chapter 5.

Oh what a great story I want to be him so badly ....a cock on every girl he meets and not just small ones.

I usually get annoyed at the whole 'horse-dicked female-dom' thing (seriously though its bullshit, he hasn't fucked anyone ONCE these past 4 chapters, at least his ma had the decency to go down on him), but i have never, and i mean NEVER, seen anyone turn it about on me like you did in this chapter specifically, and this series as a whole. Please keep writing.

...Just please allow our main man to do the fucking sometimes, please?

Chap 5 pls

I'm thoroughly enjoying the series so far. Personally, I'd like to see some more scenes with the Mum. I do wonder what all these girl see in him though, he seems pretty gormless. Does getting shafted up the arse by tgirls make you give off some sort of pheromone or something?

Seriously need ch.5

It's nicely set up for all 5 girls to gangbang him to oblivion :-)

And maybe a bit of crossdressing?

Plus I wish I was him *sighs*

Chapter 5 please

return of may?

Mini wouldn't share him with the others. She's more likely to take him and make them watch. I can say he should draft that as whole friend of his. That guy needs a good duck in.

Please write the next chapter for us

This is so well put together and thought out I'm jealous of Pete would be nice if life twisted for me like that. They were just falling in front of him.

Yes, please do another chapter.. I wouldn't mind being Pete..

Please you got to add another chapter please ASAP

So everyone this guy runs into is a transexual? Gimme a fucking break. What's even crappier is that you are a good story teller describing details and whatnot but this premise you're running with is complete shit. You pretty much did this story in with the last chapter but I thought I'd give the last chapter a go. Well thanks for completely killing any and all hope for this story.

Great working hope to see more

Please do more of this i want to see what the sister does.

I should only be so lucky. Come on people, its a story. And a good one at that. Anxious to see what is going to happen next.

Great please more!!

This was a great series you should definitely try to make more. Man I wish I was the main character.

Sort of like watching old time serials what or who will show up next

Love the story line. Would love to read more. Would like to read that Peter pushes the competition between the girls for his heart. That he makes May dress really feminine and sexy when they go out as boyfriend and girlfriend. That Mini gets really jealous of the others and feels really inadequate of her lack of feminine curves compared to the other girls and buys huge tits and a huge round ass and has her dick pumped to a huge size to be superior to the other girls to get what she wants and win Peter. Peter can't resist all Mini's new sexual stimuli, charms Paul and his sister into becoming a couple, Mini's Dad marries Peters Mom, and they all live together in the Yelstin mansion .

Even though this series has been inactive for a while, I’ve been back to it a few times and want more

Last chapter I thought May and Paul,even April,and Pete's Mom and Sister were possesive but then Mini came along and damn but girl made the others seem mild,and Mini basically told Pete he was now her boyfriend and wasn't gonna share him with anyone else.Now I understand the whole Futa mentality that they can be childish and sexually excitable women when it comes to Pete,but shouldn't Pete tell Mini and the other women in Pete's life that he would be happy to be in a relationship with all of them,that way each of the futa's gets to fuck him and be happy to have someone they can dump their cum into and everybodies happy.

I am sure Pete would be okay with that,and if depending on their opinions of Kimmy,May,April,and Mini about their feelings for Pete maybe one,two or all four of them could each be Pete's girlfriend and they could all share him and love him in their own ways.I really hope the author writes more of Pete and the Futa's.

That was so hot. I love a dominant woman. Wouid love to find a a woman like them I'd have the perfect life. So plz continue with this wonderful series.

Mini is going to imprison Pete to be her little cock slut,but that can't be cause so many Special Women depend on him and his magical holes to satisfy their sexual needs,like Mom,Kimmy,May,and April,along with Mini now.

Can't all of Pete's women accept each other and share,I am sure Pete wouldn't mind so each one got to fill his ass with girlcock and cum,and his mouth too.Besides only May seems to be the only one to really care about Pete to want him as her boyfriend,all the rest just seem to want him as a fuck buddy to empty their cum into his mouth and ass.

So I think those like April,Mom,Kimmy,& Mini should just learn to share him,and let Pete and May be in a relationship and fall in love,and have futa babies and boy pussies to satisfy the next generation and make the perfect Futa & Boy Pussy world where they all live happily and have the girls be satisfied filling their boyfriends and boy pussy with sweet hot sticky girlcum,that would be pure heaven for everyone.

Now Peter has got to be the luckiest guy on the planet as I can't even seem to find 1 dominant top woman and prefer them with 6 to 8 inches and not overly thick. and he has 5. If I could find 1 like May I would marry her

If only i could have one of theses beauties in my life never mind four

Hope you will continue this amazing story

Wow, another great chaper. Interesting that he could turn the tables on her slightly. Maybe he can gain the upper hand with the other ladies in his life. Thanks for sharing & hope there are more chapters in the future.

Shame the author has not added to this as I was enjoyin* the series

Please More!!

Wish I had a mother, May,April or Mini in my life. I am truly a submissive one and would like to be dominated by any of those people. :)

Five trans? Lucky sod, I have to do with a big fat dildo ☹️

Great story of course I would like more chapters...LOL

AWESOME story so far. Need more please!!!!! This is Great!!!!!

Lucky guy i love chicks with dicks im average size about 5 when erect reasonably good girth but undersized balls iv been informed. If a girl cock is bigger than mine then they do the fucking as i become sub i will then fuck their sweet ass with pleasure but im happy to take a load in my ass anytime from a sexy girl with a nice cock no matter what size them cumming as well as me is a must

Interesting stories, although the girls could stand to be more generous to him. Looking forward to more chapters.

I guess this is the ending since he never came back to finish and it’s been a decade almost

For me, this chapter is where this story "jumped the shark".

This whole story is just f*cking ridiculous.

This was silly enough to be good. It is a pity it is an unfinished work but then you find many of those on here. I guess they start with a concept and then it goes off the rails and they bail. Too bad since some of the unfinished stories have many possibilities and all it requires is a little bit of imagination.

lucky Peter

Oh for crying out loud, not another unfinished story ?

Far too many on here, just far too many..........

Rapier

FUCK THIS SHIT!!! IT WAS OK AT FIRST, BUT IT TOTALLY SUCKED WHEN ARROGANT SPOILED BITCH ENTERED THE STORY!

Unfinished story!!!=Low Vote

He must have a great ass when everyone wants it.

I want part 5-6-7. I want him to end up marrying may because she has always loved him.

I love ❤️ it wish I could have had those big cocks tho

Hot,Hot Story 🔥🔥🔥

Hot!!!!

Too much BS

Going too far now. Not being much fun anymore. 2 stars.

Bill S.

I think you have a problem.. if the mother gave birth to him and his sister then she must have reproduction organs unless you want us to believe she pissed them out , so why are all the girls he meets only want to be tops

Titillating but not believable -points for redundancy

It was awesome I wish it was me as I sit here with my mom beside me reading her book

Please continue with this story line, but have Peter meet up and have sex with a real girl/woman.

Need to clarify how the mom had him and his sister if she's trans

He needs to meet a real woman who wants to have fun with him and the others or who's forced to

This story,first is Kimmy and Mom and Pete(r),maybe Mom had Kimmy who indeed was a Futanari just like Mom,but when she had Pete(r) he came out a little more masculin and yet still retaining some feminine traits from his Futanari Mom.So both Mom and Kimmy were naturally drawn to Pete(r) as there cock recepticle so they ultimately made him their cum dump.

But then Pete's Bestfriend May who secretly stalked him for years found out Pete was now his Mom's and Sisters personal cocksleeve she too had to have Pete,and so May lured him to her house after years of not inviting him,only to find out May was a Futa too and so was her Little Big Stister April and they proceeded to get him to try their shecocks.

But May wanted Petes ass so she got April to prep him for her cock by licking his asshole,then May went and got behind him and pretty soon fucked him just as hard as Mom and Kimmy did.But he didn't confirm or deny May if he would be her boyfriend,so there's still hope May get him to be her eventual boyfriend,because neither Mom nor Kimmy can just openly date Pete.

Now the complication is Mini when she found out Pete was a Futa Magnet she initially was uppity and snobbish and thought everyone was beneath her until she met Pete's brashness and honesty that she was a cruel heartless bitch who cared for no one,but after Pete told her straight-up what a bitch she was Mini changed her tune.

But that didn't stop her domineering personality and still fucked Pete's face and ass brutally,alas Mini did a good thing and kissed Pete passionately while fucking him relentlessly.And finally Mini declared Pete was now her's forever and wasn't gonna let him go and he was gonna be her personal fucktoy slave/boyfriend.

If the author had written a conclusion where Pete could be with all 5 Futa's to keep them satisfied they could all use him as their cum receptacle,that would have been okay.

So are they futas, also please continue this storyline but have Pete meet a submissive bottom shemale or futa that will let him fuck them

L

It's been nine years bud, please continue this story!

Wow!!! Horny as hell right now and I want to have my ass stretched and be fucked! I wish you were still writing!

More! Great writing, evocative. Good story line.

This story is now a joke. Ridiculous.

Story was unironically great. Mile a minute kink nonsense is fun, but there was a pretty solid mood to the whole piece until Mini showed up. Marcus's gun adds to the problem.

I'm certain this doesn't continue, after all it's been years and he's disappeared, But if anyone ever finds themselves inspired by this, The quick comeuppance of The protagonist bringing up her father and using said father's wish to purchase his mother's company and keep up some manner of good polite relationship with them cowing her to some degree such that she knows that she can be as dominant as she wants, but she still has to believe him with some manner of dignity or self-respect, let alone life in him, probably in a comical manner when it gets brought up, would save the tone. Good luck and Godspeed.

Love this I am 64 iwish time i was like this Gerry