Hmmm. A bit over the top. Then again, that's part of the new 'normal' I suppose.
Including strumpy getting behind bars, and maga/republican idiots getting berserk. I feel that would approach that situation very well.
Well, kind of liked the premise of the story but it was too short to get any descriptions of what was going on. Oh, I get that the subject was brainwashed but what she experienced was too brief and disjointed to truly engage this reader. I liked the premise and would like to have given a 5 star rating but it gets only a 4 at best. If possible a longer story with better descriptive details would increase the clarity.
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Thanks for the chapters!
Weezer: Say it ain’t so.
good update, need to have more pregnant partners within the teams of each story series
This is lovely. Too bad it's so short.
Welcome to the Jungle by Guns 'n Roses?
So a story about an emotionally damaged woman being emotionally manipulated even more...alright.
Dragonforce - Through the Fire and the Flame? 5 stars for another fine chapter regardless.
Ok, what's the tune? LOL
Interesting style, good story
Hmmm. A bit over the top. Then again, that's part of the new 'normal' I suppose.
Including strumpy getting behind bars, and maga/republican idiots getting berserk. I feel that would approach that situation very well.
How many breasts does this girl have?
Thank you for new instalment. just dont hung up on this cliffhanger too long please
Well, kind of liked the premise of the story but it was too short to get any descriptions of what was going on. Oh, I get that the subject was brainwashed but what she experienced was too brief and disjointed to truly engage this reader. I liked the premise and would like to have given a 5 star rating but it gets only a 4 at best. If possible a longer story with better descriptive details would increase the clarity.
That was a fun read. Is there a sequel?
I fee like my life is incomplete without this being finished. I want Ivy to triumph. Good God give me an ending already!
BRILLIANT!!!