Your work is excellent, my only thought was that Alexandra should have been the redhead. Might sound trite but as you formed the characters in my mind I saw her personality more in that light. I couldn't put this one down; not that the sex wasn't good, but the story was better.
Very good stuff. The "reality" of the situation plausible considering the side-effects of known drugs. Not much of a stretch to think something like this could be developed, and the pavlovian training caused by the pleasurable orgasms would be enough to teach the women to continue the behavior. Looking forward to the next one!
That was spectacular. I loved, really loved that ending, promises for my imagination to run wild with...of course I wouldn't be opposed to another chapter...just saying.
This series was a thrill to read. The sex was amazing, all of it. You have a gift for arousing both the mind and the body.
Thanks for sharing and I will be looking eagerly for your next posting.
Can the sex get any hotter...or the story line any better...with you DT, it believe it can.
Another complaint about the historical stuff, smh, it's called fiction for a reason and you do it so well. Let the bitches bitch, you DT are one amazing writer. Gifted at drawing us readers in and keeping us on edge with your imagination, and descriptive ability.
Thanks for sharing and keep up the awesomeness.
This is my first step into this category by following your work DT. It was wholly worth it!
I liked the idea of the drug to win the war. Can our heroine find a way to overcome the effects of this drug...I better read on and find out... *smiling*
On a side note, it is fiction so a little creative licence is okay in my book with regards to the cameras...in my humble opinion.
If this is first person narration, how does Robbie know about the undercover agents?
I enjoy the story, the complexity, and the interaction, moreso than the sex. I'll keep reading!
If Robbie can read sexual emotions, can he read other emotions? It seems so, given the conversation on the couch. He can broadcast images (smoking, poverty), which makes him a powerful political force. He might want to switch to poli sci, psychology, or foreign relations (especially with his talented harem).
I hope the Thanksgiving visit adds backstory to the history out talent. His parents, the ancestry, who else has/had the talent, nefarious individuals at large in the world...
The simple solution to the "two cocks" problem: invite a couple. A long weekend, where all of the permutations are achieved. The other guy won't be a threat, since he too has a solid love.
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If you don't write a sequel I will literally hunt you down...
Excellent
Your work is excellent, my only thought was that Alexandra should have been the redhead. Might sound trite but as you formed the characters in my mind I saw her personality more in that light. I couldn't put this one down; not that the sex wasn't good, but the story was better.
Wow
Great. Can't wait for Chapter2
Story............
Chapter 3???????????
Very good stuff. The "reality" of the situation plausible considering the side-effects of known drugs. Not much of a stretch to think something like this could be developed, and the pavlovian training caused by the pleasurable orgasms would be enough to teach the women to continue the behavior. Looking forward to the next one!
Ohhhhh My GOD!
That was spectacular. I loved, really loved that ending, promises for my imagination to run wild with...of course I wouldn't be opposed to another chapter...just saying.
This series was a thrill to read. The sex was amazing, all of it. You have a gift for arousing both the mind and the body.
Thanks for sharing and I will be looking eagerly for your next posting.
IDB aka Dru.
Holy smokes
Can the sex get any hotter...or the story line any better...with you DT, it believe it can.
Another complaint about the historical stuff, smh, it's called fiction for a reason and you do it so well. Let the bitches bitch, you DT are one amazing writer. Gifted at drawing us readers in and keeping us on edge with your imagination, and descriptive ability.
Thanks for sharing and keep up the awesomeness.
IDB aka Dru.
fantastic
best story for ages.love it i cant waite for moor please dont keep me waiting.
Wow.
Please, please, please say you aren't ending it here. I LOVED this, but there absolutely must be more!
Awesome.
This is my first step into this category by following your work DT. It was wholly worth it!
I liked the idea of the drug to win the war. Can our heroine find a way to overcome the effects of this drug...I better read on and find out... *smiling*
On a side note, it is fiction so a little creative licence is okay in my book with regards to the cameras...in my humble opinion.
Thanks for sharing.
Dru.
Wow!
Very impressive! A great read, truly.
Please, write more about interracial lesbians (like Compulsion or Four Weeks) - no more this hetero stuff!!
Please!
Questions and suggestions
If this is first person narration, how does Robbie know about the undercover agents?
I enjoy the story, the complexity, and the interaction, moreso than the sex. I'll keep reading!
If Robbie can read sexual emotions, can he read other emotions? It seems so, given the conversation on the couch. He can broadcast images (smoking, poverty), which makes him a powerful political force. He might want to switch to poli sci, psychology, or foreign relations (especially with his talented harem).
I hope the Thanksgiving visit adds backstory to the history out talent. His parents, the ancestry, who else has/had the talent, nefarious individuals at large in the world...
The simple solution to the "two cocks" problem: invite a couple. A long weekend, where all of the permutations are achieved. The other guy won't be a threat, since he too has a solid love.
to dumb
you can stop it .
IF there is not a sequel...
woe unto you, my fine sir. woe unto you....