First or third person writing?
Get a grammar and spellcheck...the idea was good, but really poor execution
Love the start cant wait to see where it goes
This has been a great story. The "jumping around" with the timeline has been exactly the way an 18 year old airhead would tell it. Plus the last part was as funny as fuck to read
This is disgusting writing. What a turn-off. Good plot idea, terrible execution.
Dumb fucking pussy boy
Very interesting twist, a good reading. It could have used lot more eroitc details tho.
I sure could use more writings like this, it went a littile fast, but still very good.
Haven't read a story like this in a while. Great storyline with much appeal. You also opened this up for lots of future possibilities. 4 stars!
I hope you continue this story
That was definitely one of the better stories I've read.
Good work! I hope to see more stories from you. :)
1: the constant miss use of your (your leg) and you're (you are).
You are gay, or curious or what ever the @(*& you want to call yourself, fine. But warn people, or put your writing in the correct category.
State Street? Snow?
Not at all, Anonymous! I spent the last month trying to wrap up my other series Prison Pet. Since that series is complete I should be able to focus on Act 2. It takes about a month for me to write these longer stories so be patient. I appreciate your interest!
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