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Still rooting for Julie, Alex and Susan!

While I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter, I am really rooting for the twins to lose and Susan and Cindy to pick up some new slaves of their own! Thanks for writing such an enjoyable story.


Total Garbage! No Stars!

You sir are simply amazing

I love the way your characters have evolved so naturally and wonderfully. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Good to see you back after so long. This was a great premise, and I'm very sad to see it end.

I like the story, even if it stretches reason quite a bit, but she says her aunt is seriously sick and needs rehab and he responds with " Awesome!"?

I'm not sure anyone would be okay with that.

More Please

Great setup, eagerly awaiting the next installment.


I tried to read this, but three paragraphs in I gave up. There is no sentence structure, no continuity, little punctuation, and even the sex of the main protagonist bounces back and forth. It's unreadable!

I agree that it's a good story and that some errors made it confusing and hard to follow at times. Please continue


3 of the Family together! Dad needs to be included in the Family dynamic! He needs a job and Lots of Sex with his Family! More Chapters PLEASE! Great Story with Thoughtful Mind Control!


Perhaps I have not made myself clear, but this is not the end of the Celestial series. I thought perhaps my five other comments to that same affect might have gotten that point across.

But after receiving fifteen different emails and two lazy comments written by Anon commentators that obviously didn't read the rest of the board, I feel the need to repeat myself.

The story doesn't end here.

Frustratedly yours,

more please

this is the best, most enjoyable series on Literotica. Please dont stop!


Whaaaat?!?! Where have you BEEN?!??!?
And don't tell this is the end!!!

I haven't even read the chapter yet, but I always loved this story and its premise.
It's a sad thought that there officially won't be any more, but at least you returned to give it a proper conclusion..

I can't help feeling that abandon and wantoness is more satisfying and longer lasting than sheer depravity.

Good Story, but...

While this was an interesting read, perhaps you should have ended it after the transformation. I was interested to see what kind of demons the three of them were going to become. So while the series was very well written, the ending fell rather short with me. It left a few too many loose ends for my tastes. If this was presented as just another chapter i would have rated it higher 3.5/5 stars

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