All Comments on 'Walk Away'

but might suggest some editing, imho, which isn't that humble, nor talented. Try trimming out so many 'I's, and the poem seems a little long. But tell me to fo if you don't like my suggestions. ;-)

But the line 'stabbed chairs with broken armrests' really gets me. Will have to use it sometime. Even if it's just in an insurance claim. :)))

bit short