All Comments on 'A D/S Christmas Story'

The story was well written, but as someone who knows people in the life of BDSM, there is one correction I need to make in your title; when you are talking about a Dom and sub relationship, it's D/s; subs are submissive therefore don't get the capitalized letter.

The only other change I would make is this: when you are writing a story and you have a quotation, unless you put in the person's name, you don't capitalize the first word after the quotation marks.

"He's so lame," she said. Or "He's so lame," Carrie said.

Otherwise, good job.

Fun, light.

A delightful, light, fun story - thank you.