by jake_in_cincy
This is definitely over the top. Except for the pain of the having her stick that dildo in my ass I might very well jump up and down and yell out "EUREKA! I've just met the girl of my dreams!" Please hurry with Chapter 2
make it more kinky, make her do things exhibitionist way....make her do it infrnt of strangers, delivery boys etc.....add kinky stuff like golden showers, dirty talking, abusing n all such hott stufff.....expecting more n more parts, longer ones......
You totally would have gotten a 100 rating from me if you had gone further and finished the story. This was a good start to something that could have been great. Sorry that you didn't finish it/