All Comments on 'A Memory for a Lifetime'

She's happily married to a great guy, and yet dives into bed with a complete stranger? It's well-written, but I think that stretches credibilty just a bit. And swapping from past to present tense and back again is a bit annoying.

I choose my stories by category - it's nice to get a "heads-up" if the story is actually only about a one night stand (Erotic Couplings, maybe?) or a cheating wife (Loving Wives). If you pass it off as a romance, I am going to expect something more between the characters. For a Loving Wives or Erotic Couplings, it would have been fine; as a Romance, it was a disappointing read. - crystal from CA

I read for content on this site, not form, so switching tenses isn't a big deal for me. Nor do I particularly care which category a story finds itself. I simply enjoy stories that entertain me. What made this a romantic, and enjoyable, read for me was the perspective and romantic nature of the main character.

You should really write more! I would be excited to read it. :)

I really liked this story, especially the way you took your time building the characters, letting the reader get to know and care about them without getting boring--not an easy task for a writer! Nice work, I hope we can read more from you.

I’m a romantic and loved the story. I think it’s probably true as most one story writers seem to write about an event that meant a lot to them and they just have to tell someone or write about it. I do hope she never tells her husband unless he’s into that sort of thing because if he’s a romantic the knowledge of it will break his heart as I well know.