All Comments on 'A Night At The Baseball Field'

You did really well on your first Literotica story. It was quite short but told an engaging, believable tale with enough detail to be interesting.

Keep going!

Was this your first attempt at writing anything? Or just erotica? Either way it was a good job. Enjoyable read. It had the desired effect on me! It was believable. And absolutely sounded like it was based on personal experience!

Enjoyed this first story at Literotica, and await future stories. You might have a red H with your first story here!