All Comments on 'A Passing Fancy Ch. 02'

Nice story so far.

Keep it goin!

...I think this is a wonderful 'Oops' moment.

I'd love to see where you're going with this. Do please continue.

Thanks

pleaseeee...................

she lied and she is a slut after all.

But it sure needs an ending to make it complete.

This fits with my comment on the first part. This is why she never tried to get back with him. She became a slut and swinger and Jack was her latest fuck. It all makes sense now and we know that she did not go to Jack's place to just do books. We definitly need a next part. I hope there is no marriage.

a third part.... please!!! i have to know!!!

I don't get it??? A ring? How is that bad?

Did she lie about her history or what? Did she lie about what happened when she went to help him??

Obviously she is willing to swing with Jack and Tammy - that is going to be a huge problem -

You going to finish this one?

I doubt it'll be finished, but he probably is a clueless asshole like they've been saying he is. Oh well...

Or maybe it's time for something completely different! ;)

You built one hell of a shitter, but you didn't put a roof on it! An I just hate getting wet while I'm taking a dump. I guess what I'm saying is finish it.

all the tale remains to be told

Especially the twist at the end. Well paced, funny, and well written.

Me thinks her comment about only once with Jack was a crock of shit....I get the feeling she has been with Jack many times and certainly participated in his parties.

When are you going to finish this story

Finish please,it is been a long time.

She is lying cheating cunt for sure

JFTFS, already!

She has become a swinging slut and he is a pussy, yeah...

when used with loyalty and love. TK U MLJ LV NV

Please finish at least some of your damn stories!!!!!!

Sylvia always screws on the first date so she is a slut! I wouldn't believe anything that a person like Sylvia said. I have observed a lot of Sylvia type women in my lifetime and I would never go out on a date with them since they would have STDs like Herpes and HPV.

It is. Stories of life only end one way, anything else is just a continuation.

Thanks,

MGM

Me, I'd never get back together with her, NFW! She had no faith in him, she jumps to conclusions to fast. She just assumed something was going on, and left to screw around with other men.

...the second one of this person's stories I have read and neither had a conclusive or satisfying ending. I read for pleasure, not to write my own endings. That is the author's job. One star.

You have a way with open endings - I just love it. Sometimes I'm really tired of all the stereotypical 'happily ever afters' some of the better authors still seem to feel compelled to produce on a regular basis. Thanks again!

And that's when the fight started

So if she really loved him she would have lied some about Jack and say the sex was nothing special and he was not better nor hung like a horse. Now this poor guy knows that Jack is and was a better lover and she loves Jacks big dick and will always be around Jack. No way could I deal with that. Sure, insecure and fragile ego but I am honest.

I would though, tell Jack and Sylvia that I get at least one weekend alone with Tammy.