All Comments on 'A Rewarding Evening'

Need I say more?

tha was hot it got me an my girl off streight away it was awsome keep writing.

It might have been good, but after I read that she had an "organism"? Yeah, I was done. Please get someone to help you with spelling and punctuation. There is a right way to do dialogue and this isn't it.

Story went on just a wee bit,,,but loved the seduction part..while she reclined and played with her breasts.