by egabrag
I enjoyed your story but it had a very dark turn it the end. I admit I do not understand the culture in India and maybe this is a real thing there
wtf ??? firstly,these things do not happen in india....it is a story with a twist in the tale...like shorts stories of Archer.....but where the fuck is the erotica....??? this is literotica.....opening up a packet of condom and later finding the torn packet is NOT exactly erotica !!! this is one big KLPD...let down in queen's language !!
Sorry if there is any mistake, I am not good in English. Congrats.. First of all for the way of writing & then for the story,