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Afterwards, they shared a shower and had breakfast on Stephen's balcony which overlooked the lush green courtyard of the 1930:s block of flats where he lived. Eloise asked him about the art on his walls, and he explained that he worked as a digital artist and illustrator for Charles' small but well connected company. She told him about her job as a hotel desk clerk, which she enjoyed but wasn't particularly proud of. Apparently she felt that working in the service sector wasn't fancy enough for some people.
Stephen explained that he too had worked in the service sector before catching his break, and that sure, some customers would always consider desk clerks and cashiers as little more than slaves, but that one had to remember that most people didn't. As long as she was enjoying the work, and knew it made others happy, it was good work.
They did not talk about her snide behaviour the night before. She seemed slightly embarrassed about it, and Stephen didn't feel that it needed to be brought up.
After he had seen her to the door sometime in the early afternoon, and kissed her goodbye until she was slightly breathless, Stephen went back up to his flat and started his computer. Then he dug up the note with Nayana's email adress and opened his webmail.
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- COMMENTS
deCarabas_hjalmost 13 years agoAuthor...of sorts submitted, so keep an eye out.
By all means make requests or suggestions, I may use them if I like them. Any constructive criticism is also welcome.
CaitlyCatealmost 13 years agoAwesome plot with well written scenes. Will there be a chapter 2?
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoVery well written, and I do hope that there are more "of type." Very good erotic description. However, you really need to proofread better: (A) You typed "ting" when the word should have been "thing" and (B) you typed the wordk "hosts" when the word should have been "host's" or "hosts' "
deCarabas_hjalmost 13 years agoAuthorWell, I actually have ideas about a few of the others, yes, but that is still early in the writing process. We shall see how it turns out. By all means go read the "Secret Room" stories, for the very first appearance of a couple of the characters.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoExcellent prose..... thanks!
Hopefully chapter two will bring some of the characters we met earlier into the spot light.... LOL
