All Comments on 'A Tempting Offer'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
What about Bob's wife?

In my opinion: Injecting Bob's wife into the story, or at least telling something about her, would enhance it. Where was she during this interlude?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I really love .............

Yeah right you dont do the talk on IM or the acts if you really love someone else. A brainless bitch nothing more.

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