All Comments on 'A Thanksgiving to Remember'

by BlueMoonSoon

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Rollicking good yarn!

This tale is a fine example of the type of smut I enjoy best: minimal *everything* except for the raunch!

Congrats for the excellent word smithing.

MetamorphoseMetamorphoseover 13 years ago
Extremly hot

Loved it.

Wasnt funny though, cant say why, it's hard dissecting humor. The patient usually dies under the scalpel. Maybe because you were trying too hard and fun should come out more easily in a by and by sort of way. Don’t know really.

But the tale was written with skill and extremely hot, you got my five stars.

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