by Massageguy
... it sounds like it's over. What about the Wicked Witch, the flying monkeys, etc. Much more could have gone into this series. You left out a name at the end too, try an editor.
very creative and well written loving the idea, only wish it had been longer!!
lol lord know i'll never read frank l baum the same way again :P
I especially dig the crude oil as the tinmans come, good thought