All Comments on 'Adventures in Oz Ch. 03'

by Massageguy

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msboy8msboy8almost 19 years ago
Good Story, but...

... it sounds like it's over. What about the Wicked Witch, the flying monkeys, etc. Much more could have gone into this series. You left out a name at the end too, try an editor.

caoimhe42caoimhe42about 14 years ago
nice!

very creative and well written loving the idea, only wish it had been longer!!

lol lord know i'll never read frank l baum the same way again :P

I especially dig the crude oil as the tinmans come, good thought

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